Blog #7
I think that what I truly noticed from my writing that I am getting way much more better. The reason that I am say that is, because I noticed that when my paper was corrected at first that there where not that many grammar errors. I also think that it was very hard to make the true connections to my icon and to figure out what the true connection that every body could make with.
One of the techniques that I used that I am happy about the way that I used it was. The avoid the “ings”. The reason why is because I was not really using that much but I used them. So that help me a lot because it made the essay have way much more of a scenery, in your mind.
I think that I wouldn’t do another draft the reason why is because I got many people to read it and then at the end I got the teacher to read it. So I pretty much got so much feed back that it was very good and I now exactly what the teacher wanted.
“Which in my eyes is truly the best thing that you could do when you are famous.” I think that this is a good sentence the reason for that is because its is deceptive it says what I feel as well.